Join for FREE | Take the Tour Lost Password?
[x]

deviantART

:+fav:
 
©2009 =alexiuss
:iconalexiuss:

Artist's Comments

~Niagara Peninsula Conservation Area

Model: :iconnahlah:

Critiques


:iconsturm:
There's no doubt about it that this is a truly wonderful piece. The thing I like most about this photo is how all the lines in the photo (the two streams of water, the edge of the lake, the red cloth and even the lines of the rocks) all seem to point towards the center of attention: the model. No matter where one starts looking, the viewer's eyes are continuously drawn towards her.

The photo is very rich in color, with the blue water contrasting wonderfully against the red cloth and the green trees. There's a lot of beauty to look at in this photo and you don't easily get bored while looking at this piece.

There's only one very, very minor point of criticism for me to give, and that is that the red cloth seems a bit curled up half-way and IMHO it would look better if it had been spread out more evenly. Other than that, this truly deserves an A+!
The Artist thought this was FAIR
57 out of 60 deviants thought this was fair.

:iconsackermanmo:
The very first thing that strikes me about this piece is the incredible richness of the colors. One expects to overwhelmed by the sheer volume of green tones, and yet I find the blues and that delightful scarlet actually hold their own against the greens.

The second thing I find attractive about this piece is the perspective. Rather than giving the viewer a single flat angle, the perspective shifts from above-angled at the foreground to a seeming level angle from mid-frame onward. This provides a sense of depth, of "being there", that is hard to achieve in a photograph.

My favorite part of this piece, though, (and I suspect it might be accidental but delightful just the same) is the way the scarlet cloth matches the flow and texture of the waterfalls in the lower left frame. It draws my eye and holds it more than any other part of the shot.

If I have any criticism of this photograph, it is with what I assume was meant to be the focus -- the model. She is beautiful, wonderfully posed and perfectly lit. However, several of the other elements of the piece (including that beautiful scarlet train) completely overwhelm her to the point that she ends up being (for me, at any rate) the least noticeable part of the shot. I find that somewhat unfortunate.

Overall, though, this is one of the most beautiful portrait pieces I have ever seen. Well done!
The Artist thought this was FAIR
74 out of 77 deviants thought this was fair.

Thank you for your Critique

You are not logged in.

Comments


:icontrevg:
This looks like a very well thought out, well executed photo. Very nice framing and flow.
:iconacelia:
Is she really sitting right there or did you put her there digitally? I love the length on the cloth. I don't know if this is supposed to be symbolic of anything, but I feel a great since of beauty of solitude from it, :)

--
I am butter, I serve.
:iconnaiveminds:
wow i almost thought this was a photoshop thing
:iconhairymonk:
Very well done !!! ^^

--
Vivre et laisser vivre
:iconwebdesignmom:
Good color, and very creative!

However, the subject is too centered. The sense of longing that you're trying to bring in (guessing by the title) is lost because of this. Crop the image so that she is more to the right of the shot and a bit lower, and her gaze will drift farther, more longingly.

Other than that, BEAUTIFUL WORK!

--
MandaPanda Hats! [link]
:iconsunny-winter-star:
I SWEAR I JUST SAW HER HEAD MOVE

....its aMaZiNg :3

--
:picknose: -> :chew: -> :O_o: -> :doh: -> :dead: -> :ambulance: --> :tombstone:

COMMENTS ON SIGNATURE: 293
HELP ME RAISE THIS NUMBER

:star: I got watched by 15 people for my signature& I won 13 free internets& an oscar &2 nobel prizes& a trophy XD
:icon0149:
Fantastic!

The planning, preparation, creativity and artistry in this photo are all wonderful!
:iconpriteeboy:
A delicate streak of vivid red against a dull, hard rock. Quite a nice idea :meditate:

--
*priteeboy - proud founder of ~The Worst Artists on dA club! - take a look, have a laugh :pointandlaugh: :|
:iconalexiuss:
it's a photograph, haha
:iconeiwind:
Sweeeet man.. Was it hard to find that place?

Details

July 20
492 KB
492 KB
1200×800

Statistics

161
1,935 [who?]
21,373 (10 today)
583 (0 today)

Camera Data

Canon
Canon EOS DIGITAL REBEL XTi
1/6 second
F/25.0
13 mm
100
Jul 19, 2009, 1:42:28 PM

Share

Link
Embed
Thumb

Site Map