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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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However, with the girl, I feel like she doesn't have the same quality as the guy. Instead of having her expression look blank, she could look more distressed or angered. I think this will help convey the story between these two more if she expressed something. Also, her hair looks unfinished to me. It looks rather rough compared to the other elements in the painting and that red stands out more than I think it should. Maybe tone down the color a bit and smooth out the sketchiness with more shading in the hair. I would also try to add more of that white wrapping on other parts of her body, like her legs and a little on her arm, just to help balance out her outfit.
Nice work on this though. Love the different oranges, browns, and the subtle hint of greens in the environment
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