Sincerely, I really did prefer the original version. This one seemed too much like what I would expect from the typical comic artist looking to break into the scene. I always thought RA was something that transcended the typical.
The additions make it comic book quality, but they also take away from the originality. Spider man cause he's hanging around and a penis joke? This sub-standard humor is not up to par with what I've come to expect from you.
You are correct sir. They have indeed always been there. My sincerest apologies, although I still think that the spider man and penis jokes are not up to par with your humor. I wouldn't dare try and come up with something better, I just don't think they belong.
there's no actual penis joke, it's only implied. you get to imagine whatever dirty thing captain ACTUALLY said. in reality captain only wanted a giant statue of his boot, which is visible in next comic page.
Colours are delicious but... where's the jet engine?
Well, more seriously, I'd say the colour transition from yellow (fire) to winter-blue on panes 1-2 and 6 help better estimate how much time passed. However the light coming from the umbrella is a little bit... weird. But it's true, everything is uncommon in that series . That's why it's fantastic!