The effects, the detail, the colouring, the shading, and the imagination of this is immaculate!
I love how the menu bar on the last one slowly fades away as the bars go along and the lights kind of dim out. The short but good story lines kind of takes your mind to guess what's going to happen next as you scroll down, as this was it was completely unexpected to have that in there, i was suspecting something else.
This is an very original piece, I haven't seen anything like this before, and because of this piece I will now undoubtedly go check out your other works.
The vision and impact is amazing, the text font just tops it off especially with the dropping off "s"
Overall this is a stunning piece of work, and i can't find a flaw in it, everything is right for how it's supposed to be.
First off, I believe that the captain must have just walked up to a destroyed car conveniently placed outside the Drive Through and decided to order lunch. That in its self is absolute humor.
Secondly, I love just how detailed you make everything. Upon close inspection, each of the destroyed menus inside the restaurant is perfectly detailed with pictures of the coffee and sandwiches all McDonald's go-ers are accustomed to. There's also a sign that says to order online, which must have been what the captain was doing with his computer several comics ago, no?
When I look at the first panel, something seems a bit off, but I can't tell what exactly it is. Maybe it's that the lines for the windows for the left background buildings aren't strong enough, or maybe it's just me.
Oh, and the name tag is a nice touch.
I love how each one of these strips somehow is unrelated to other, the comic so random, yet it all mashes together somehow.
All in all, the art is wonderful, and it's amazing how you do such a great job on each of the comics while updating the series regularly. Keep them coming!