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Solaris - animated by =alexiuss:iconalexiuss:

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Collaboration with delicious flash ninja :iconvectortrance: who did the animation and sound effects to bring this painting to life.

Render time: 24 hours
Original specs: 1080p HD Video
Software used: Adobe After Effects, Adobe Photoshop, Adobe Flash
Audio:
Original sonic creation based on a few samples and loops collected from all over the place, then mixed in Sony Acid Pro 6.0

Painting by itself is at:
[link]

Critiques


:icondraco-samhain:
~draco-samhain Apr 19, 2009, 10:10:08 AM
Overall, I like this piece. It could do with a little less camera shaking and a little more movement in the actual piece. The audio gives the impression that it should be a lot windier than the animation shows. Perhaps try putting more movement into the hair instead of just making it wiggle around? It took me the second viewing to really notice the hair was actually moving because of how much camera movement there was.

I do like the addition of the glowing halo effect and I agree with those saying that the end needs more of an impact. It has some impact, but I feel there could be more considering how dramatic your still images are. :) Keep up the good work!
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:icontwistedvisionz:
*twistedvisionz Apr 16, 2009, 6:03:01 PM
This is a beautiful pic/animation and I love the idea and the vibe it puts out, but I would have to agree that its lacking some kind of climax. As a picture it has a good dramatic effect, as an animation though it seems it needs to build up to something. I don't think it needs to be longer I just think it needs to build more tension and end with a bang. The contrast and colour theme is beatiful though and I love the sense of raw beauty and power contained in something that looks so delicate. I'm looking forward to seeing more work!
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:icontvartist:
~tvartist Apr 7, 2009, 10:56:42 PM
Awesome! ^^

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~tinkerbinker1 Apr 7, 2009, 10:57:10 PM
Amazing work between the two of you.

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=Vectortrance Apr 7, 2009, 10:57:18 PM
It's been quite fun to take a static image which already has a great sense of motion, and be able to take it to a whole new level of visual impact.

Great working with ya!

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:iconquazzie:
~Quazzie Apr 7, 2009, 10:57:51 PM
That is so freakin wicked I almost wet myself. The animation makes it a TOTALLY new piece in and of itself :):horns:

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:iconryoken-ryagnaroth:
~Ryoken-Ryagnaroth Apr 7, 2009, 10:59:56 PM
Excellent work. :D

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:iconjillvalentine89:
*JillValentine89 Apr 7, 2009, 11:06:07 PM
You two make a most wicked team :]

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:icondarkmagik347:
~darkmagik347 Apr 7, 2009, 11:13:57 PM
sick
critique requested?
idk
i think it would be cool to add alittle bit more too it
like a close up of her face
or as if some one is on the ground waking up to this image
i mean whose heart beat are we hearing?
i think you could definitely go farther with this piece

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