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Wisp by alexiuss

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model: :iconcedezjonez:

location: Chatlaham Brickworks, Ontario
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:iconquestor886:
Beautiful concept and shot. My only nits are that the light on the right is a bit distracting and tend to lead the eyes away from the main subject. A little different lighting would still have given you the dramatic look that you were going for. The photo appears to be tilted slightly causing the metal uprights look like they are leaning. It wouldn't take much to straighten, crop, and kill the lightbeams. I really think that would take this image to the next level.
I do like the subtle way you signed the image, too many make their signatures entirely too obvious.
Otherwise very beautiful work, I always look forward to your new stuff.
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Wow, some of these people are harsh. I think the picture looks great. The big open space on the left give the picture a great sense of space & atmosphere. There's nothing wrong with a nice tight crop, but if you had cropped it in tighter, you wouldn't have gotten that great sense of openness. To address the comments left about your model, I think she's perfect for this shot. This isn't a Maxim mag photo shoot people. This is industrial. She has a perfect haircut for an industrial look, & I think her skinniness adds to the alien-like quality of it. The powder effect is cool & lit very nice. The only thing in the pic that bothers me is that it's slightly off-level with the beams. I'd say either rotate it a little one way (cw) to make them even, or rotate it a lot the other way (ccw) to make it totally crooked & more disorienting! Good work, don't stop.
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SirFerrick Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
www.marcelloviolini.com/tekken…

Awkward moment when Tekken steals your art...
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:iconmilnerbros:
MilnerBros Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014
Definitely appears that this photograph was the inspiration for Terry Richardson's Wrecking Ball music vid for Miley Cyrus.

en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wrecking…
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aaaa0000aaaaa Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Wow! Stunning image.
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:iconfrakman:
frakman Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2012
wow I love that effect!
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:iconhomestuckitis:
homestuckitis Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2011  Student Writer
Can I ask how old this model is?
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:icondeddy2die4:
deddy2die4 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2011
To those who say the model looks discusting because she is skinny, did you take the lighting and shadows into consideration? They do create an illusion of her being skinnier. I looked at her other photos, and yes she is thin but not sickly so. But anyway, this photo is amazing!The way the motion is captured, and the eerie setting, creates a twisted yet beautiful story.
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:iconcombative:
Combative Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
great work
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:iconakelasan:
Akelasan Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2011
damn creepy...
very nice!
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:iconcwazyazn:
cwazyazn Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2010
it really is an eyegasping shot
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:iconrysameansme:
RysaMeansMe Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2010
Great.
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:icondanandria:
Danandria Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2010
Totally awesome shot, this just paints a great picture for me.
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:iconwaterish:
Waterish Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Beautiful, fascinating, almost magical :)
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:iconprincessjuliet:
princessjuliet Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2010
This is amazing. I am no art critic, I merely respond to things that make me think and/or feel. I see a story in this, which is how I connect with art. I love it.

I've also not been a commenter much but I wanted to leave my props here to the artist.
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:iconconnnn:
connnn Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2010
no jokes here. This is fantastic.
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:iconlexxii:
lexxii Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Outstanding !
:)
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:iconkeys307a:
keys307a Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!
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:iconafeinnude:
aFeinNude Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2010  Professional Photographer
Sick shot. Great execution

aF
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:icontotalstranger:
totalStranger Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
very very awesome!
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:iconbutterfly-girly:
Butterfly-Girly Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2009
:butterfly:SPEECHLESS:butterfly:
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:iconkaiofman:
KAIOFMAN Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2009
brilliant!
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:iconmetamorphacilles:
metamorphacilles Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2009
just amazing work:headbang:
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:iconbitchinblack:
bitchinblack Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
Fuck tha haters and nitwits. I think she's just fine the way she is, and this picture flat out rocks.
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:icon6blackangel66:
6blackangel66 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2009
WOW!!!
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garion333 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2009
I think this is a brilliant shot, though you can put me in the camp that finds the light on the right a tad distracting. It's hardly ruinous, but that's my take. The powder effect and overall image quality is stunning.
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za4em9 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hmm, I think it's fine. The light on the right does not distract me; I think it adds to the feeling of motion to the whole image: the viewer's eye is drawn towads it, even though some part of it wants to stay on the model and the space. Interesting.
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paroxism--now Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2009
This is fantastic!
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:iconalice091:
Alice091 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2009
this is honestly one of the best pictures i've ever seen taken. great job, this picture is fantastic in every way
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amayatokemi Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2009
Wow. It's totally breathtaking. I love it. I especially love the whole industrial look. It makes the whole image complete. And where the lighting is ~ perfection.

Fantastic job.
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:iconcaptainellen:
CaptainEllen Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2009
AMAZING!!! I can't wait till' I can take shots like this!!!
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:iconwelcometothegray:
welcometothegray Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
Featured : [link]
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:iconkitchenyou10sull:
Kitchenyou10sull Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2009
I don't even know what to say about this picture... but it is captivating
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:iconfemdro1d:
femdro1d Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
Omg! Your works are just pure <3
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codykin117 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2009
Though I haven't visited your wonderful gallery in a long while I still believe that your art is as inspirational as any other's in your gallery. Really, all of the comment about the model you used, I'm glad to see that you've just given them casual disregard because your model choice worked perfectly with the atmosphere of your image. And the lighting effects you used work gorgeously together so I don't understand why everyone thinks that flash is too distracting and drags their eyes because really my eyes were instantly on the model. The way her body and it's arch stands out against the dark background is fabulous. So please continue doing what you love and enjoy, these nudes are quite lovely because really, you make them into ARTISTIC nudes, unlike those people that just take pictures of things like that for attention from the wrong crowd of 'artists'. This is wonderful and it works well together, each of it's elements flow to create a lovely punk image with a beautiful, not underweight or anorexic, model that can pull off the punk feel you needed.

Jackie~
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AprilMcGuire Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2009   Digital Artist
I'm pretty curious to hear what it was on her head that made that misty trail come up. Love the concept, and the lighting, don't think that spotlight is distracting, I think the picture would be a tad too dark or flat with out a bit here and there. wonderful concept photos you always have :clap:
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rose-drgnfly Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2009
I really like this one
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:icon4eburashka:
4eburashka Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2009
WTF !? :wow:
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:iconmatty111:
Matty111 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2009
fantastic work
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VilePolkaTie Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
The image is.. chilling, and creepy. I can picture it in a horro movie, though It has greater quality than most horror movies I've seen. It's... quite brilliant, but I'll stick with chilling
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Undead-Fatality Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2009
im skinny
does that make me disgusting?
those who bash on thin models are just as bad as people who make fun of overweight ones
that isnt to say that under eating is good, or that our society isn't pressuring the models in ways they shouldn't, but cant we just except her beauty regardless instead of focusing so heavily on the social implications?
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Undead-Fatality Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2009
(sry this double posted for some reason)
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:iconchesire1984:
Chesire1984 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2009   Digital Artist
amazing!
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:iconorbandor:
Orbandor Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2009
omg<3
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:iconmiss-frost:
miss-frost Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2009
Could someone please get a Big Mac into this girl? :P
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:iconkillwa:
Killwa Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2009
Everything looks great except the skinny model, Disgusting!
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:iconundead-fatality:
Undead-Fatality Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2009
im skinny
does that make me disgusting?
those who bash on thin models are just as bad as people who make fun of overweight ones
that isnt to say that under eating is good, or that our society isn't pressuring the models in ways they shouldn't, but cant we just except her beauty regardless instead of focusing so heavily on the social implications?
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:iconkillwa:
Killwa Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2009
I have seen too many live skelatons in my life, and I tell you it doesn't make me feel good at all.
why can models be moderate.
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:iconundead-fatality:
Undead-Fatality Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2009
they can
but everyones body type is different
if you preach tolerance at the expense of those u consider unnatural you might be unintentionally discriminating on a group of people who are, in fact, just naturally skinnier than most of the world.
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Kratos32889 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2009
Dude I eat like an elephant and I'm still that skinny.. nothing wrong with it.. Great Shot!
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KrystalTrinity Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
First off.. I wanna steal those boots... XD
Secondly... Where's her right hand? O_o My eyes keep getting drawn to her right hand cause I'm trying to figure it out... lol.
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:iconaliencry:
Aliencry Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Her thumb it actually the only part showing and it runs to the right of her leg.
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