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Snippy: poem of doom

Mon Jan 30, 2012, 4:52 PM



I've a lot of time on my hands living inside the whale and such. ....So, today I wrote a poem about Captain:


Oh Captain, my Captain! I say it to mock,
You're lucky as hell but to me you're a c***.
Please spare me the missions, I've no head for heights,
Balloons and big lists lead me only to blights.
Evading the probes of an alien race,
Then having to witness your > : ( angry face...

But what choice have I? I'm involved in these fights,
With Cancerous space-monsters full of red sprites,
And Lemonade weirdos and God knows what next,
Just how can you stay so serene and unvexed?
What price should I pay for your simple delights,
Be eaten by whales after soiling my whites?

I know you won't listen, but you'll come unstuck,
And one of these days you'll run right out of luck,
Your empire will fall, and your ego besides,
It's karma for sure, like the turn of the tides,
And then I will lol, sitting in my own muck,
Coz after all this I just won't give a f***.

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:iconanimething7:
animething7 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
damn snippy! cut it freestyle!
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:iconchobits-chik:
Chobits-Chik Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I love this, Romantically Apocalyptic is Amazing
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:iconkikuelric:
KikuElric Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012
I love Snippy even more, every girl wants a deep man :heart:
XD
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:iconchesyrefrog:
ChesyreFrog Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
The day will come when The Captain will fall...

And knowing cruel fate Pilot will take his place. :p
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:iconpsfox:
PsFox Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Isn't there a poem about Abe Lincoln called,'O Captain, My captain!' ? xD
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sad-roses Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2012  Student General Artist
Google "Walt Whitman My captain" =]
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:iconpsfox:
PsFox Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Ah, yes, that be it! Lol thanks for the info.:)
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SilverNinjaWolf Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Beautiful
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Hagamablabla Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012
Would you rather be in a whale or hang upside down from a train?
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noneofurbussiness Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2012
wow that is pretty good rhyming
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